Talk:Jin-Ri/@comment-27360363-20140308211658

Personality-wise, she sounds like the classic "deuteragonist" girl. Nothing special besides that she is the weapon. Similar to Guilty Crown's Inori. Or Nagisa from Clannad if you will .-., I have nothing against them, they're just the "average". But making them develop or have a nice ability (personality-wise), makes them a better character.

I can't think of anything for her, because I have not seen what she is. Maybe she might be charismatic. She's hopefully not just an 'object' [there'd be another word in between a and 'object' but it's not appropriate for some people].

Maybe make herself a skilled cardfighter, make her strong enough to not rely on Shin. Weak side-characters Are another way to create a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu. Or if you want: make that her development, but consider she survived like what? How many years alone, that's not very likely that she's weak anyways.

Maybe give her a flashback episode about her backstory [not the episode after, introduce the characters first: Villains, Heroes]. That would help a lot, reading between the lines.

Really, she has nothing to develop .-. and nothing to make her stand out. She's already flawed enough to make her human (or close to it). Have a mini arc between her and Lisa, no idea what they're going to talk about but maybe they can develop together. Make her hate Lisa maybe? They can develop a friendship with each other :P.

Anyways I'll see what I can get from the 2nd chapter from Jinri, she really has nothing special as far as I've seen .-.