Thread:Jesteban360/@comment-25542469-20180721130925

Hey Jeste, I just wanted to discuss some things about your clan idea and character suggestion. Just a few things I'd like to know or would like to suggest. Well, I think that's all so far. I'll let you know if I have any further questions or suggestion I'd like to make. 
 * 1. What is the clan's lore? You said that their leader wanted to prove that they are useful as well, but what do they do in the first place? Every clan in DE specializes in some military aspect: Kagero is the air-to-air unit, Narukami seems to be the air-to-ground, Tachikaze is ground-to-ground, and Nubatama and Murakumo split sensitive operations between one another. So, whether they're from the main timeline or an alternate one, what do they deal with? Based on the name, and what you said about the avatar unit, I'm assuming they deal with the wind. Thus, I would suggest something like ground-to-air operations, as I can't find much info on those, so they may not be needed as much as the others. That would give the clan a reason to prove itself to the rest of the Empire. To show that while their job is minor, it is still important. Just a suggestion though.
 * 2. What's the clan's playstyle? It obviously needs to work with the lore, but I'd still like to know what it is, to get an idea of how they would play. Sadly, while I have a lore-suggestion for you, I don't have a playstyle-suggestion aside from causing the opponent to discard cards, or something similar. However, that may be too close to Nubatama.
 * 3. While I do like most of your character suggestion, I do feel that the bullying thing may be a bit much. I know my characters have a dark history so far, so I can't really say much, but I don't want every possible character in the story to have a tragedy that's tearing them apart. I have a possible idea or two for her, but I want your opinion first, as she is your character suggestion.