User blog comment:RainEStar/Introductions Are in Order/@comment-25077685-20160405161334/@comment-25077685-20160409033921

The section below the linebreak is a slice of my fanfic that I'm currently re-writing. I am not sure if my format looks decent enough, what's your opinion on it? I will ask about my style and writing after I finish the whole chapter, but right now, I want to know if my format is okay. (There are hyperlinks provided on the texts, you'll see when you hover your mouse on it or left click it.)

A voice had been made to snap the boy 's mind from the alluring screen.

'' "Excuse me. But, could you pay attention to the fight, please?" ''

Suddenly getting back to his own senses, feeling the card shop's atmosphere around him once more.

'' "I- I'm sorry..." '', he said, shyly.

'' "It's okay. Let's continue our fight." '', the man, who was sitting on the opposite side, replied. '' "With a boost from Snogal, Starlight Violinist attacks your vanguard." ''

'' "I- I guard!" '', nervously, the boy placed a card on the guardian circle.

'' "Gablade attacks your vanguard!" '', the man declared his next attack without a hesitation.

The boy took a moment to look at his hand. He took his time to move thoughtfully. ''
 * If I guarded this, and he pulled a trigger, his standing rear-guard would make it through...* ''

'' "No guard." '', the boy confirmed his decision to the opponent.

The man then rested his hand on the deck. '' "Triple Drive." '', he revealed the top cards of the deck. '' "I get a critical trigger ! Alright, that's the game!" ''