Thread:RainEStar/@comment-25542469-20180526163114/@comment-27589621-20180528174151

Character design looks good. I do question the white hoodie on top of all grey, as that isn't very asthetically pleasing if you were to get art for it. Perhaps some patterns or anotehr color added? Unless he's trying to blend into the background because he's shy, in that case his color pallete makes sense.

He'll be friends with Saori? Interesting, the kid could use some friends after the diffriding incident (I didn't watch the last few episodes so last time I checked he was in a hospital). This looks like a great start for character devolpment.

So Hikari is older? I thought she was the younger of the two. Car accident tragedies are well-used, but they are realistic, so if you can sell it well, it'll work. It does make sense as a condition, as depending on how a person is hit by a car, their spine and ribs could be fractured, leading to paralysis and perhaps a damaged lung. But do you want the condition to be as serious as full lower body paralysis? Permanetly crippling a character (especially before the story starts) doesn't make it easy for them to rise. If it was her legs and ribs that were mangled, then physical therapy would aid to potential recovery instead of just keeping a healthy lifestyle. And recovering from something like that is very mental as well as phyiscal. If your legs don't work, you rely on people for the simplest things. And when your lung is damaged, you're always out of breath and in pain. Exhausted too. Hm... but if she's lucky to be alive the upper body trauma would eed to be pretty sever. Well, heavy details aren't always needed. I wouldn't know any of this if I didn't have too many family members in medicine and I've spent way too much time in hospitals XD.

You're even creating Vanguard circle colors? I didn't even think of that when I was my making my story. Then again, I started it on more of a whim than actually a full-thought out plan. Colors... hm... not my forte, but by poking around I'm thinking blue-grey or yellowish-grey. Given the colors we've been working with so far, I'd go with blue-grey.