Thread:Kyledude788/@comment-24353980-20140218213646/@comment-27360363-20140412081250

Needs more focus ._. if you look at the newbie decks in my fic, they're terribly unfocused. For example, Eve Targett and Caroline Jiang. Their decks are slowly improving yet they're unfocused.

Eve's is a mix of extras and a Trial Deck and still being created, so that's only natural for it to become unfocused. However, if you look at the characters like Jadyn Knight, Sachiko Kuzuryu and John Lindstorm. Their decks are focused on their own abiilties.

Jadyn focuses on increasing the power of all his units (albeit at a small power increase) while at the same time trying to get the right card from the damage zone.

Sachiko's current deck focuses on gaining soul for the Mega Blast, this was abandoned due to how unwell this worked. Her next deck will be using Soul again, but ignores Mega Blast as well as cards like Vacuum Mammoth but will be focused.

John's focuses on sabotaging the opponent, stunning opponent rear-guards for small cb costs. The Limit Break is merely an extra to him in gaining the power he wants or needs.

So plain and simple, your deck needs work. First of all, the > 50 in the deck ._. that's just a large no, no, no... Considering this is a fanfiction I highly doubt it'd have 100 Chapters just to tell the story (even the first season of CFVG didn't have that many episodes. The Cardfight Wikia does this because it's based off all the cards Aichi uses in a season rather than his actual deck at the time. This could be changed, but I don't think they're changing it... Bushiroad has started character deck profiles on their website. link here

So please, keep the cards to exactly 50 like a normal deck. Finding a "How to build a Vanguard Deck" may help you more. The common grade ratio however is 17 (Grade 0. 16 Triggers [16 Triggers as I have recently found out, are compulsory. In other words, no more, no less] + Starting Vanguard) - 14 (Grade 1) - 11 (Grade 2) - 8 (Grade 3). I however use 17 (Grade 0) - 15 (Grade 1) - 11 (Grade 2) - 7 (Grade 3).

This is an example of how it varies from person to person.